Monday, July 23, 2012

Finish the Ballad #1

I thought we'd do something a bit interactive today.  Below is an original first stanza of a poem.  Eventually, I'm hoping that it will become an entertaining story when y'all start commenting.  Are you ready?  Here we go...

There was an unusual girl
Who would eat cherry cake wearing pearls
Her mother would say,
"Do not eat it that way!"
But she merely tossed her blond curl.

Whether or not the cake or the girl was wearing pearls, I'm not sure.  I guess we'll find out.

3 comments:

  1. Listening to her mother would have been wise,
    For Mom saw something not visible to her eyes,
    The "pearls" on the cake,
    Were Grandpa's false plate,
    Did she think her mom would tell lies?

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  2. But the girl was indignant still
    Her mom's words went against HER will
    So she did not obey
    What her mom had to say,
    And she brought her cake up a hill

    P.S. what is a false plate?

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